As I have mentioned, The Book of Dia has stalled. In Tucson. Where it landed in the prologue. 35000 words in.
I can't explain it. Snaketown clipped along at such a linear pace. Plot points following plot points, moving briskly to the denouement. AND a murder had been committed. In the past and present.
The Book of Dia is more circular. As in, stuck in a rut. Or an oval. or..no, rut says it all.
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